Reflection 1.2

For my second draft, I felt that it was a little hard to change my essay. Finding some of the small errors were most easy, but deciding what parts would be good to change was my main concern. Some of the areas where I did make global changes were in the parts were I felt I was writing the way I would be speaking. The informal style. To address some of the feedback from my group mates and from myself, I felt the hardest thing to do was to add sources and to make my whole paper organized. I first looked through the JMU data base to find some information, but I still have no found my jackpot source. That made me have to look harder and find some sources that skim the edge of my topic, but not totally relate to it, which I think makes my paper a little weak. Also, I’ve been having problems with finding sources with all the credentials. I have some articles from well known news papers, like the Washington post, that just have authors, which is annoying.