Corrections that need to be addressed for final 2.3 Death Penalty Paper

Things to change with 2.3 Death penalty
-Must create a stand for opposite side (Give it like 2-3 sources)
-Make your idea in opening paragraph that you are against the death penalty
-Take out any idea about correctional faculties
-Maybe remove academic source on hangings in public
-Must work on improving incorporation and ending of sources (especially the first academic source)
-Look to recite the academic source
- Paragraph 10 is the other side. Maybe you should bring it forward
-Paragraph 5 is the transition from real life examples to reasoning
-Make ending longer. Make it play with the intro.