Friday, April 16, 2010

Sentence Variety Exercise

Sentence Variety Exercise
Last year, I went on a field trip to my Advance Placement Biology class to the Potomac River. (Medium) Simple

The plan was we were going to get a boat and a tour guide that would lead us down the river and we would test the water to see if it was a good ecosystem and also we would just observe the creatures that lived in the river. (Long) Compound

My impression of the river was the color the river. (Short) Simple

It was dark brown in most of the river and in some spots black. (Medium) Simple

I really thought this wasn’t right, but my guide said this was because of all the runoff being produced from the neighboring construction of new buildings. (Long) Compound

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