Reflection 3.2

For my second draft, I felt I answered a couple of questions that I had when writing the first draft. Like the rogerian paper, I felt I needed to do some major organizing to get some facts across that were not getting across clearly. I know on this draft there are some areas when I read through the paper where I thought this was the ending of the paper when it wasn’t. It is just hard when you add an argument into your stories. Also, another thing that is hard to do is adding my information from my outside sources in. I have 3 sources, one scholarly, that I can add in. But the hardest thing I feel is to not distrust the flow of the paper. For example, I start off by semi mentioning the Exxon Valdez incident, and I was planning to show this incident as a destruction of the environment real world example. But now, I cannot find a good chuck of area I can put this part of the information. The same is for the other two